Hello friend’s, i will
to show you about my live. My name is M. Addin Al hakim, my friend call me hakim. I was born in a little city from jawa timur exactly Nganjuk, in 18 september 1996. I have
two parent father and mother. My father's name is Nasikhuddin, his job is a staf
in SD Al- Hikmah surabaya and my mother's name is Ainun Zuhro, her job is islamic
teacher. My father 42 years old and my mother 40 years old. I have one sister,
her name is Nashifa Rahma Amalia call Shifa. My sister 11 years old and study in
junior high school in Al-Hikmah surabaya. We are stay in bhayangkara regency
E5/26, sukodono sidoarjo. My hobby is All of sport, badminton, soccer, etc,
except basket ball. Motto in my live is live start from a dream. Now, i study in
PENS in electronics engineering. And now i have a job, my job is businessman. My
business is T-shirt, jersey, car, motorcycle, handphone. I promote all of my
business in all of social media. I hope we are D3 ELKA A be a champion in many
place, and i hope we are be a success and we are can make parent proud with us.
PENS JOSSSS !!!! ...
Mangsstapp boss
BalasHapusexcuse me to comment your post bro, Ithink there are some gramatical error in your post. example in sentence "my friend call hakim" maybe better you add word "me" after word "call". and in sentence "I born in a little city from jawa timur is Nganjuk" maybe better word "is" change with word "exactly". that's all, maybe I think enough. keep spirit to learn english bro. hahahaha
BalasHapusIt's very good but it would be better if you add "me" between "my friend call" and "hakim"
BalasHapusHahaha oke broo .. I'am so sorry about my english language .. Thanks for a comment
BalasHapushai rizal, why you copying my argumen, dont be a faker man :D hahaha
BalasHapusHahaha keep calm broo .. Don't fighting in here
BalasHapusSorry jek, i don't see your comment when i commented
BalasHapushaloo hakim. Im doni, I just wanna comment on your blog. Please check your post again, " I born in a little city from jawa timur is Nganjuk". It wil be better if you change with "I was born....." check your grammer again :)
BalasHapusMaybe, I must give other suggestion for you, such as you should change elektronic into electronics! Okay, that's all for me, i hope you can be more thorough again
BalasHapusThanks all .. I will repair my words
BalasHapusHallo hakim;) i just want comments your article. I think it's amaze article. But in this sentence there are little wrong word. When you said 'my father name' it's will better when you say 'my father's name' cause it's about possesion sentence. Thanks :)))
BalasHapusWawwww .. Good correction sekar .. Thank youu .. I will repair that.
BalasHapushello hakeeem haha. let see. I think you have 'typo' word in your article. please check on sentence, " I promote all of my business in all of soccal media". it must be 'social', isn't it?
BalasHapushello hakim. I think you have typo word in your article, on sentence,"...i hope we are be a succes and we...". it must be success, not succes
BalasHapusWeit hahaha .. Okeoke della and hafidz i will repair my article
BalasHapusHakim..my name is hamdan. Your articles is good, although there is some mistake. But dont worry myfriend you can try again and never give up to learn something. :*
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BalasHapusgood introduction, I think I need to get to know you even further, Hakim.
BalasHapushallo hakim.I'm just to show you some mistakes in your article "I have two parrent......"I think parrent it's a wrong dictionary.I think you must replace it with "parent".but don't worry boy you can try again and never give up :*
BalasHapusHahaha sorry iqbal .. I'm typo text hehehe .. Oke i will repair that
BalasHapusOkeee broo thank's for your comment .. I will repair that
BalasHapusHallo Hakim..
BalasHapusthis is good article, but i only suggest to you must change "we are stay in.." to be "we live in..".. this only my oppinion.. and good job
hi kim :)
BalasHapusnice explanation and good side job .
that is complete introduction.
BalasHapusHai Hakim,I think your article is good,keep spirit for your job
BalasHapus